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[G.I.N.A]

Yo hey

Your hero and the enemies.
When they fight and all, try having the hero and the enemy in the same shot.
Everyone will feel more connected. You do have some shots that do this. But balance is nice. 99% (exaggeration) of the action shots she was by her self. It will help with context too. Where is she in adjacent to them? That'll feel good.

It felt nice when that guy pinned her against the wall, the two characters were in the same shot, not only that but touching each other. That was nice.

By the way, my favorite shot in here is when the guy said "HEY!" and you were in the cockpit looking at the guy, that was nice.

[Ooohhh! Pantalones!]

ahhh! nice!

i love the ending

TheBoogley responds:

I like it best when it's over :3

[jumping turtles]

Armored frogs

that was cool, i enjoyed it.
like the visual dejavus.

turtleco responds:

armored frogs, or snakes with arms that are much shorter and can jump and have a shell.

[Rick Mann vs Boss Man]

Nice dude.

cool dude, i like it.

Check this out

"please offer constructive criticism that will be useful to the artist. "
Have you considered making it harder to defeat the boss? Let's say, on the boss's third attack it damages our hero. Now he's on the ground, struggling while the boss is charging up his next attack and you think how is he gonna survive this? Then the hero comes up with his special move and pwnz the boss.

cool results though. Havablast!

DarqV responds:

Great idea! Unfortunately we only had a day to create this cartoon. One of the rules of "5 Second Day"

If you can, go to youtube and search "5 second day titmouse" to see what some other people at my work did. They're all pretty funny!"

Thanks for the fantastic feedback!

[The Clown Downstairs]

lol

lol dude.

hmmm, does anyone think the clown needs a hug?

JohnDavidHeptinstall responds:

lol what a nice view on things

[Tucan : Ender]

lol cool

i remember seeing this before it was done.

again...i love your directing........... . . .. .. . . <3 . . . . . . .cool waky toon.

stephenscottday responds:

yea all that stuff was done in a couple days, i need to just start finishing stuff sooner.

[$5 Trap]

A movie is two things.

Everything before the ending, and the ending.
ANYWAYS lol.

The monster should upgrade his equipment, he should do 100$ trap.

[Shared Food Tastes Better]

it does taste better!

Mm!

lol cool stuff

jackbliss responds:

Wow thanks a lot! Getting a perfect review score from a reputed great flash artist is truly an honor! Moreover I'm very glad you agree... it DOES taste better!! :D