SpikeVallentine's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Another short fairy tale]

Mission Complete!

The dress looks wonderful.

annnnnd i like this animation! i love the dramatization of the story, during the credits.

MAKE MORE!

Sinapi responds:

sr, yes sr!

[WGJ4K: Robert Burgless]

hahahahah

Max. :)

I like your stuff. Jerry. This. Awesome. hahaha.
Your "game jokes", wow, I'm sure gamers could really relate to them. HA

Also, i love the behind the scenes. Awessome! The camera kept going and I listened in on their whole convo! Nice dude. I like that, i could only hear them.

your direction is lovely. havablast

[For Nuts and Glory]

cool beans

The third squirrel. You should make it more worthy of a rival. More worthy for 2 v 1.

It'd be nicer if it was bigger than both of them combined so it feels better that the 2 team up. They'll need each other! But if the third squirrel isn't bigger than them...then they don't really need each other, so it feels less compelling.

anyways, you did what you did.

and.....maybe......have...the third one come in sooner.....cause there's this big fight, this big tug of war, then okay, what's next, okay, i'm waiting, and then all that for a third squirrel that's not even bigger than them?

have fun

DoomzDayChikn responds:

the size of the 3rd squirrel has nothing to do with how the movie resolves itself. By making him bigger, I would be bringing in another potential conflict and then suddently ending the movie? That would leave the audience hanging.
But by making it a regular sized squirrel, the audience understands that 2 squirrels easily beat him up. In filmmaking, you have to tell a story that will resolve itself, or tell it in a way that the audience can figure it out.

[Palote]

Those 6 limbs

I like them! Makes me see past the stick figure design.

[Turing Test]

No no no!

A movie is two things. Everything before the ending, and the ending.

I really like this, it was interesting and all. You had me interested without leaving the scene!

Now look i like it and all but don't end it like this! It ends with nothing! Hmmm, what I'm saying is, maybe you should have considered an ending with more depth.

What does it mean when "Your partner has disconnected". If you set up earlier that the Chat Partner says "Help me. They're going to wire my brain again! If they do it again I'll be dead!" Something like that.

So now, when it says 'Your partner has disconnected", that phrase now means, they wired his brain and he's dead. The way it is now is, nothing. But yeah, it has that open ending feeling. But you can still have conclusion with an open ending feeling.

What would happen if the partner said "Help me! If they catch me chatting in this room they'll release the nuke." When he disconects, you'll think "uh oh...is a nuke gonna happen?". What are the people thinking the way it is now? Not much really. So what I'm saying is, raise the stakes. Put more tension and conflict.

But I really enjoyed this! Look, a 10 out of 10, see? And duh, these are just my suggestions. Annnd it still made me think! Look, I'm even writing a review!!!

[When You Wish Upon A Star]

wow lol

wow dude

[Cats]

lol

lol

idiot-monarch responds:

lol

[CIGAR WARS]

hahha

i love when two blades come out. Made someone smile.

[--THE JAM--]

dude

yah right. people don't just fall from the sky and learn the instrument in one second. yeah right dude. this is so unrealistic dude. and the amp wasn't even plugged in, even more unrealistic dude. you've really plucked my last feather. that is the last straw dude.
just kidding man im just being a jerk
ahaha. anyways. i just wanted to say i just sa w it and enjoyed it dude

if your feelings were smashed earlier from my critqueing, then just relax and move on. i wa sjust joking.bye