Nice imagination and writing. I like the "are you still listening?" Nice line.
Hhaha "bullets", that reminds me of something XD.
Very nice writing how you made your mp3 "interactive". "badgers", "seeing nothing", "trippy colors". (I have trippy colors)
What accent is this? Is this the same one that I liked a couple emails ago? "My apologies, these are the ones that kill you."