Galazor 2009-07-05 02:42:51

I just got another idea!

A 12 year old boy who lives in New York City awakens one night to find that he is in a Wichita bus station with a black briefcase handcuffed to his arm.

TrevorW 2009-07-05 03:00:41

Ok, it was silly of me not to leave proof that I can write.
Here are a few of my published works:
<a href="http://trevorw.newgrounds.com/news/post/339298">http://trevorw.newgrounds.com/news/po st/339298</a> - Scary/depression/dark
<a href="http://trevorw.newgrounds.com/news/post/331578">http://trevorw.newgrounds.com/news/po st/331578</a> - gatsby-ish/dark/romance

Non published --
<a href="http://trevorw.newgrounds.com/news/post/331709">http://trevorw.newgrounds.com/news/po st/331709</a> --dark/depression

More that are one ng {<a href="http://sprintt.newgrounds.com/">http://sprintt.newgrounds.com/</a>}

checkplus 2009-07-05 03:00:45

opening:
child is born paraplegic and blind. He shows a telepathic power to affect matter. His parents take him away to a small rural town to keep people in fear that someone will take him away. As he grows up, he finds that he can control his limbs and reach out to detect what is around him using his power. The drawback is that the power damages his body the more he uses it. At about age 12 some robbers come into their house and kill his parents. He looses all control and attacks with all of his power going through his right hand. He destroys everything in front of him including the robbers and his entire arm up past the elbow. He wakes up a day later with no arm and starts wandering. After some time, he is getting beat up by a group of kids and is thrown into a creek. One comes at him with a bat and instinctively he tries to defend himself. Where his arm would have been, there is an arm made of water and where the bat hit it, the water had frozen.

lol, sorry. Got a little carried away. I know this isn't really your type of story, and I kind of just ignored the "Brevity" request. If your interested, I have alot more, but this isn't the place for it.

LazyBum00 2009-07-05 03:49:11

well first i wrote a long paragraph but i decided to keep it short soo...

a boy who was shy in high school wants to break out of his shell during his first year of college and the story deals with his encounters with the unique ppl he lives with

biIIgates 2009-07-05 03:49:25

I got a story. A young fighter in china town was realy good at fighting. everyone liked to bet for him. one of his friends told him that he went too far but he didnt listen. he lost a fight and all his fans turned on him. he thought that he made a bad choice and would like meet his friend again. he didnt because he was to afraid of his friend. his friend tried to look for him but it was too late because the fighter committed suicide. and they all lived happily ever after the end.

silentducklng 2009-07-05 04:09:57

hey dude its me the guy with the heart condition, i am also the guy that tried to help you to figure out how to get your movie snow snow for lusie on newgrounds.

anyway i have this story thing that i think is kinda cool, but i am not an animator or fast drawwer.it also doesn't have some of the parts done but i do have some of the concept art for a few of the characters and places done if you maybe wanna help out or somethin PM me cuz i dont get that much time on the computer and its kinda slow so it takes forever to scroll down to my comment and read all of your replys.

p.s. i think all of your animations and work are truly wondrous and much better than anything i could every make.

Zirrous 2009-07-05 04:19:04

A super intelligent being from outer space wreaks havoc in the internet. It infects the government computers with weird viruses and fills them up with porn. :D

Deadclever23 2009-07-05 04:23:38

Title: The man in a grey box.

It's about a mad man who lives in...you guessed it...a grey box. In this box he is tormented by a product of his own mind a giant flying cucumber on skis. He then meets another crazy man at the other side of the grey box and together they set out to slay the giant flying cucumber on skis.

An epic battle ensues in which the first crazy man has an epicly large, flaming sword and the second crazy man has a gun which fires chainsaws. They fight for ours and eventually the crazy dudes win.

It turns out that the men didn't just slay the cucumber but the mans madness as well because it was all a metaphorical battle. He is then released from the grey box by his unknown captors, he walks to McDonald's, eats a cheeseburger, then has a heart attack. The end.

rtil 2009-07-05 04:29:44

your page used to be filled with kawaii girls and now there are scary men all over it

TheBoogley 2009-07-05 06:18:18

the goat is like the apocalypse or wrath of god or whatever, digesting current society and pooping out a new world order.
The apocalyptic digestion revolution will not be televised.

deathisriseing 2009-07-05 06:53:27

how about a love story when like this person can enter peoples minds and change every thing that they r thinking and this guy enters another guys girl friend and makes her forget that she had a boy friend so he trys to get her to remeber him but she just wont so he goes and finds the person that did that to her and they have a fight to the death but after he kiss the guy he gets shot from behind by the mind enterer guy and befor that girls boy friend dies he tells her that he loved her forever and wishs that he had more time with her and when the guy dies the girl picks up a gun and says "im coming to be with you my love" is that a good story????

PiGPEN 2009-07-05 06:58:47

I've been writing a story about an A.I. made from the brain of Mao Zedong, where the Great Firewall of China was made to prevent him from attacking financial institutions, which he ends up circumventing during the 2008 Beijing Olympics and ends up causing the current global recession.
...it's an allegory about freedom or something.

SaintStudios 2009-07-05 08:40:33

A normal office worker guy tries to survive an alien invasion.

Unique stuff I know.

Lost-Chances 2009-07-05 09:27:38

Plenty of stories on my userpage. Feel free to use any of them, they're mostly dark. I also may have another story which I could send to you through PM.

Phrobo 2009-07-05 09:35:38

A man gets sent back in time to find two ostrich eggs.
He finds out that he is actually the mother of those eggs and married to a gay robotic ostrich which shits weapons. Then he is set to find out about human and ostrich anatomy. The trip naturally containing endless amounts of violence. (And human on ostrich action.)

Necro-Lancer 2009-07-05 12:29:35

A steampunk utopia that has "Digital gateways" that lead to cyberspace. In cyberspace people can hack fire-walls, or use the realm as a shortcut to get across the city! :3

Slit518 2009-07-05 13:07:57

I sent you a PM.

VidGameDude 2009-07-05 13:52:55

Can i PM my pitch of shadow genesis to you?

well then again.....lol i want to animate it but i'd like to share it with you.

VidGameDude 2009-07-05 14:59:08

In fact, mind if i add you to aim friends?

you dont have to, just saying for easier chat system between friends :D

Sausau 2009-07-05 15:51:23

You love this girl, don't you, you always loved her. You're not the prettiest guy around though, no wait. You never knew love before. So what ? Yeah, these girls at the kindergarten you thought you loved were just simulacres. You tried to ask her one once, but hey, you are ugly, may I have to remind you, you don't have the right to be loved, nor to love.

So since this day you decided not to ask anyone anymore. But this girl is different. They all are my son. But you don't know you love her yet, you just want to be friends because she seems better than all those bitches. And as it goes, you discover an incredibly sympathic girl, smart and not pretentious at all. You see, she likes to make her up, but she is also natural, such by burping or talking about shit. Mmmh, well, you become friends, great friends.

But HEY everyone is harrassing you, they say you love her but don't want to tell. You tell them to fuck out. This girl knows you're just friends. You think you know it as well. You're a marginal, you don't really talk about your feelings, people like you because you're a funny guy, but inside your heart is a mourning that won't ever mend. Love is forbidden to you, but love, whatever some idiots might say, helps live like nothing else, better than anything else. But you're ugly, you have girls as friends but never had girlfriends. However, you lie at yourself, at your goddamn heart. Every morning a spirit visits you, because every morning when you wake up and at night when you lay down, you think at her, and hold your cover as though it was her body. And with the imaginary warm it emits, you always sleep happy.

But one day you realize it was not friendship anymore. One day you have understood what is this feeling you have never known. But you can't ask her out, you know sh doesnt' love you, she told you, and she only likes the pretty guys. It would break your friendship, actually the only reason that makes your life happy. You just act like her best friend, and you're both happy with that. You don't ask more.

Someday though, she fell in love with one guy. And yes, they become lovers. This guy has many friends, and obviously, when she is with him, she acknowledges her boyfriend's mates. And slowly she slips away from you, for these new guys. She always goes out to party at night with them. She barely cares about you anymore. At least that's what you think. The boyfriend is not the one that bothers you the most, no, it's her new friends. And everytime you're about to pass away, she comes at you to remind you she is still your friend. What a confusion. You don't know wether she likes you or not. You slowly become an ever-mourning person, glooming into his bedroom, waiting to talk to her. You can't hate her, nevermind how hard you try, everyime you see her, it's like you fall in love for the first time again. You know joy and melancholy both in the same feeling.

But you're all alone. You have time to think. And you come to the conclusion she just talks to you out of pity, and you decide to end up all this crap. Who would care anyway ? Her ? Nah, she has new friends now, and your death would only makes her closer to them, so that's a good point for them. In fact, you don't do it by hatred, but for love of her.
Though, her feelings never changed towards you. You couldn't know. But your suicide fails. You are still great friend with the girl, but forever you'll live with this weight on your chest.

This may sound cliché and shitty, but this is a true story and there are no word powerful enough to describe it. If you call it emo, well you're just another moron who didn't understand to feelings except the pleasure of a sperming cock.

Have a good day.