Everyone's arms fall off on Earth. Hilarity ensues.

you got younger!

Ordinary individuals, from around the world, mysteriously develop superhuman abilities, and then seek to use them to prevent the end of the world as foreseen in images produced by a precognitive painter. cool eh?

I haven't got it all worked out yet, and it probably sounds pretty stupid, but here goes:

Two young men battle and one of them wins. The loser goes home, defeated, and is confronted by the Devil. They make a deal where the loser sells the Devil a part of his soul, in exchange for the power to beat the one who so humiliated him. A year passes, the two square off again, same outcome but the loser is a little more ruthless. The loser goes home, sees the Devil again, and considers that he hasn't been so soundly beaten this time. Same deal, a little more of his soul gone, he becomes a little more evil. Another year, another fight, another loss, the loser goes home and meets the Devil again, same deal. This happens a few times (and each battle the villain looks and acts more and more demonic, less and less human), until the villain sells the rest of his soul to the Devil. By this point the hero is an old man, and the villain (kept young by no longer being human, though still mortal to arms) finally wins, but his wounds are fatal. He dies, and he sees the Devil in Hell. He at last realizes that in evil, even victory is futile because even when you win, you lose.

Sounds stupid, huh?

In Miami, an orphan is raised by a detective who discovers that his foster son has the urge to kill. He directs the impulse of the boy to kill bad people, teaching him how to operate without leaving any trace. After the death of detective, the orphan works in the forensic department of the Miami Police Department, where his step sister works in the Vice and Narcotics Unit. During his free nights, he leads a double-life, chasing and killing murderers and collecting samples of their blood.

you see, there's this goat, and it eats grass, and the grass is all like, STOP EATING ME, and the goats all like, MAKE ME, and the grass gets eaten and it's wailing in agony and shit and it's like, so gross

so, do I get the job?

There's this plane crash right, which leaves people stranded on an island where loads of crazy stuff happens, and theyre hunted by what at first seems like a mechanical dinosaur, but then turns out to be a smoke monster. Then they meet the islands inhabitants, who are crazy and want to kill them. Then they all go crazy going back in time until they set off a big bomb to try and prevent the future.

Giant penises begin to slaughter everyone on earth, and only one man can stop them, Billy Mays.

Or

Jesus is ressurected and has to battle a large army of gangsters, he wins but little did he know that the predator was watching over him and is choosing him for prey to put him in a brand new alien stripclub opened up by pimp-pred himself.

you probably already noticed this, but ashlyn sanchez's and the EXP's jokes are already TV shows. It seems obvious, but it looked like you actually took Sanchez's idea seriously, so I just thought i should warn you.

A comedy!!? There's too much comedy now a days. Make it a surrealist horror film,
now that's the ticket.

see there's this kid typing at the computer and he's about to puke all over himself, brb

i cant see this backfiring at all

Daydreams.

As you peer off into the barren landscape you see the wind blow the dust across the horizon. Ruined buildings, blood-strewn trenches, pock marks (left by the bombs off long ago), and skeletons are what greets your eyes. As you approach what is left of one of the buildings you feel an arm on your shoulder. When you turn to look at the person who touched you you awake as the professor throws a black-board eraser at your head. You must have been day-dreaming again and the class is still staring at you. You just laugh and shrug it off and class resumes. By the time class ends you look around you expecting to see the shell of a world left behind. But the sun greets shines upon your face and trees offer shade to those below. Standing there staring off into the distance you get lost in your own thoughts and soon you drone out the sounds of the world around you. As the enemy charges at you on his horse with lance in hand you feel the force of its impact on your chest and are knocked unconscious. Awaking to the sound of a hammer striking an anvil. Confused and injured you sit up to ask where you are, but you feel a sharp pain where the lance struck you. The smith spits off to the side and mutters to himself ("That's the thanks I get for saving your sorry ass, just trying to kill yourself again"). Laying back down you notice a figure standing in the doorway. Having caught your attention you try to sit up again and you are left standing in the open clutching your chest. Passersby are staring at you with a look of intrigue upon your their face. You pay them no heed and ponder about getting medication as your dreaming habits have become more unstable. So you walk home and decide to watch the television to rid your mind of any thoughts. As it turns to a commercial that you despise you start thinking about why they even bother trying to sell this crap to anyone anyway. The idea comes into your head that you could probably come up with a better way to sell their product to people. But you hate the product too, so you start to think about other things. One thought leads to another and . . . (insert story stuff here)

Please enjoy the remainder of your twenty-four hour span of time.

I have an idea for a more serious story

There's this boy named Scott, he could never quite figure out his true place in life since everyone's love and attention for him is superficial. They only like him for his looks, his reliable assistance, and the shine in his blue eyes rather than his thoughts, opinions, and ideals. Although he is very insightful, empathetic and can be very helpful to others with advice and favors, he never really feels appreciated. What keeps him down is this girl named Sarah who practically stalks him and hangs around him all the time. Although they are neighbors, and reluctant childhood friends, this girl represents the negative side of everyone around in the form of one person who is always needy, desires constant attention, and only cares for Scott for eye candy and taking advantage of his generosity.

One day he gauges his eyes out in spite, on the same day the sun went out suddenly(symbolically). Sarah comes to his house and lights a candle and notices that his eyes that were once adored are now gone. When she asks why, he replies " This whole time you thought I was listening, but I was just watching the light between us dim, trying not to stare at your forked tongue or the venom it drips. The way you hold that match so steady, unaware that heaven is collapsing under so much bliss". Then like a 3 second apocalypse.

I have several ideas.

1. A story set in Gotham city focusing on the Riddler, who is being aided by a mysterious being that wishes to help "reform" him while helping with his last riddle. One of my journals has more information, although it might be on my "Cerebreus" account.

2. Two separate stories somehow involving the idea of "least expecting it."

2a. The Antichirst comes to the earth, but no one suspects him because "he's the obvious choice", thus fulfilling the part of the bible saying no one will know its him.

2b. A demon promises to return to terrorize a town when they least expect it. He had always appeared during one of the many suddenly occuring freak thunderstorms, so the townspeople assumed he would come some other way on his return. So every moment of peaceful whether they're paranoid, but during the freak storms they feel safe. Eventually, the demon returns the way he used to, because no one expected him to, thus leading to his return. This can be done as a comedy.

I have more ideas, some grand, some on a lesser scale. For instance, I have this idea involving ugly babies. It is a comedic piece. I don't want to say what it is out in public, so I'll PM you it in a moment.

Let me know if I should submit more ideas and what you think of the ideas I already have.

How about you tell the story of the great journey you, a man in his forties, went through to return the a 21 year old body?

:D

a man with chairs for arms is tired of his bland life of serving as VIP sitting at a posh restaurant, meanwhile, his ex-wife, who comes from money, is gradually having her body surgically altered into a penis shaped rocket ship so that she can fuck the moon while drunk convicts rattle around in her hull. when the man with chairs for arms finds out he's the return incarnation of the White Oak Brother of native american mythology, he sets out to stop his ex-wife from raping the moon and giving birth to an apocalyptic race of violent drunk moon-machines with human souls.

the grass is a metaphor for, like, society.

just sayin but that AshlynSanchez person down there got that story off a show called HEROES just thought u should know. i cant think of anything right now but i think your style of art would go well with a serious and maybe creepy type of movie. Noir maybe i donno.

Here's something I've been thinking about:

A Japanese exchange student is traveling with their American correspondent through Amish country (I could bury you in a mountain of reasons why if you wanted) when a drunk driver plows into their car and severely injures the american driver, maybe even paralyzes him below the waist or something. The exchange student manages to survive the crash with minimal injuries and goes looking for help. The student goes to a nearby farmhouse to ask for help, since their cellphones were destroyed in the crash. Unfortunately the farmer is a veteran from WW II who was in a Japanese prison camp and still has nationalistic grudges against the Japanese. At this point, the poor student is left in a strange country, in an even stranger sub-culture, and is at the doorstep of a disgruntled WW II vet asking for help. I'll keep it brief, but I could definitely go on from there.

I have a story that I was going to enter for a writing contest on the forums, but I missed the deadline. The full story's on my userpage, but the plot is about a man who wakes up on an island with no memory besides his own name. Through a series of dreams, he eventually realizes that he is dead and in Hell for killing his wife and child. It ends with... well, I'll let you read that for yourself. Just be prepared: it is DARK.

I took a lot of time writing it for the contest and I'm still kicking myself for not getting it done on time, so it'd be awesome to have someone bring it to life in Flash. Give the story a read and tell me what you think, even if you don't like it. I like feedback and can use it for future contests.

Ack, meant to say "even if you don't use it"

I wont stand here and pitch a story. That isnt how a writer gets payed in such a place as NG. Get on AIM and I will tailor a story to your needs. Also it wont be generic lifetime/Nora Robberts bullshit.

I don't normally do this either but I like a few of your 2007 works and therefore I like you. Cheers.

I just got another idea!

A 12 year old boy who lives in New York City awakens one night to find that he is in a Wichita bus station with a black briefcase handcuffed to his arm.

Ok, it was silly of me not to leave proof that I can write.
Here are a few of my published works:
http://trevorw.newgrounds.com/news/po st/339298 - Scary/depression/dark
http://trevorw.newgrounds.com/news/po st/331578 - gatsby-ish/dark/romance

Non published --
http://trevorw.newgrounds.com/news/po st/331709 --dark/depression

More that are one ng {http://sprintt.newgrounds.com/}

opening:
child is born paraplegic and blind. He shows a telepathic power to affect matter. His parents take him away to a small rural town to keep people in fear that someone will take him away. As he grows up, he finds that he can control his limbs and reach out to detect what is around him using his power. The drawback is that the power damages his body the more he uses it. At about age 12 some robbers come into their house and kill his parents. He looses all control and attacks with all of his power going through his right hand. He destroys everything in front of him including the robbers and his entire arm up past the elbow. He wakes up a day later with no arm and starts wandering. After some time, he is getting beat up by a group of kids and is thrown into a creek. One comes at him with a bat and instinctively he tries to defend himself. Where his arm would have been, there is an arm made of water and where the bat hit it, the water had frozen.

lol, sorry. Got a little carried away. I know this isn't really your type of story, and I kind of just ignored the "Brevity" request. If your interested, I have alot more, but this isn't the place for it.

well first i wrote a long paragraph but i decided to keep it short soo...

a boy who was shy in high school wants to break out of his shell during his first year of college and the story deals with his encounters with the unique ppl he lives with

I got a story. A young fighter in china town was realy good at fighting. everyone liked to bet for him. one of his friends told him that he went too far but he didnt listen. he lost a fight and all his fans turned on him. he thought that he made a bad choice and would like meet his friend again. he didnt because he was to afraid of his friend. his friend tried to look for him but it was too late because the fighter committed suicide. and they all lived happily ever after the end.

I've sent a pm about series ideas, but I also have a good story for a single movie. Here:

http://eammy.newgrounds.com/news/post /297607

Enjoy!

hey dude its me the guy with the heart condition, i am also the guy that tried to help you to figure out how to get your movie snow snow for lusie on newgrounds.

anyway i have this story thing that i think is kinda cool, but i am not an animator or fast drawwer.it also doesn't have some of the parts done but i do have some of the concept art for a few of the characters and places done if you maybe wanna help out or somethin PM me cuz i dont get that much time on the computer and its kinda slow so it takes forever to scroll down to my comment and read all of your replys.

p.s. i think all of your animations and work are truly wondrous and much better than anything i could every make.

A super intelligent being from outer space wreaks havoc in the internet. It infects the government computers with weird viruses and fills them up with porn. :D

Title: The man in a grey box.

It's about a mad man who lives in...you guessed it...a grey box. In this box he is tormented by a product of his own mind a giant flying cucumber on skis. He then meets another crazy man at the other side of the grey box and together they set out to slay the giant flying cucumber on skis.

An epic battle ensues in which the first crazy man has an epicly large, flaming sword and the second crazy man has a gun which fires chainsaws. They fight for ours and eventually the crazy dudes win.

It turns out that the men didn't just slay the cucumber but the mans madness as well because it was all a metaphorical battle. He is then released from the grey box by his unknown captors, he walks to McDonald's, eats a cheeseburger, then has a heart attack. The end.

your page used to be filled with kawaii girls and now there are scary men all over it

the goat is like the apocalypse or wrath of god or whatever, digesting current society and pooping out a new world order.
The apocalyptic digestion revolution will not be televised.

how about a love story when like this person can enter peoples minds and change every thing that they r thinking and this guy enters another guys girl friend and makes her forget that she had a boy friend so he trys to get her to remeber him but she just wont so he goes and finds the person that did that to her and they have a fight to the death but after he kiss the guy he gets shot from behind by the mind enterer guy and befor that girls boy friend dies he tells her that he loved her forever and wishs that he had more time with her and when the guy dies the girl picks up a gun and says "im coming to be with you my love" is that a good story????

I've been writing a story about an A.I. made from the brain of Mao Zedong, where the Great Firewall of China was made to prevent him from attacking financial institutions, which he ends up circumventing during the 2008 Beijing Olympics and ends up causing the current global recession.
...it's an allegory about freedom or something.

A normal office worker guy tries to survive an alien invasion.

Unique stuff I know.

Plenty of stories on my userpage. Feel free to use any of them, they're mostly dark. I also may have another story which I could send to you through PM.

A man gets sent back in time to find two ostrich eggs.
He finds out that he is actually the mother of those eggs and married to a gay robotic ostrich which shits weapons. Then he is set to find out about human and ostrich anatomy. The trip naturally containing endless amounts of violence. (And human on ostrich action.)

A steampunk utopia that has "Digital gateways" that lead to cyberspace. In cyberspace people can hack fire-walls, or use the realm as a shortcut to get across the city! :3

I sent you a PM.

Can i PM my pitch of shadow genesis to you?

well then again.....lol i want to animate it but i'd like to share it with you.

In fact, mind if i add you to aim friends?

you dont have to, just saying for easier chat system between friends :D

You love this girl, don't you, you always loved her. You're not the prettiest guy around though, no wait. You never knew love before. So what ? Yeah, these girls at the kindergarten you thought you loved were just simulacres. You tried to ask her one once, but hey, you are ugly, may I have to remind you, you don't have the right to be loved, nor to love.

So since this day you decided not to ask anyone anymore. But this girl is different. They all are my son. But you don't know you love her yet, you just want to be friends because she seems better than all those bitches. And as it goes, you discover an incredibly sympathic girl, smart and not pretentious at all. You see, she likes to make her up, but she is also natural, such by burping or talking about shit. Mmmh, well, you become friends, great friends.

But HEY everyone is harrassing you, they say you love her but don't want to tell. You tell them to fuck out. This girl knows you're just friends. You think you know it as well. You're a marginal, you don't really talk about your feelings, people like you because you're a funny guy, but inside your heart is a mourning that won't ever mend. Love is forbidden to you, but love, whatever some idiots might say, helps live like nothing else, better than anything else. But you're ugly, you have girls as friends but never had girlfriends. However, you lie at yourself, at your goddamn heart. Every morning a spirit visits you, because every morning when you wake up and at night when you lay down, you think at her, and hold your cover as though it was her body. And with the imaginary warm it emits, you always sleep happy.

But one day you realize it was not friendship anymore. One day you have understood what is this feeling you have never known. But you can't ask her out, you know sh doesnt' love you, she told you, and she only likes the pretty guys. It would break your friendship, actually the only reason that makes your life happy. You just act like her best friend, and you're both happy with that. You don't ask more.

Someday though, she fell in love with one guy. And yes, they become lovers. This guy has many friends, and obviously, when she is with him, she acknowledges her boyfriend's mates. And slowly she slips away from you, for these new guys. She always goes out to party at night with them. She barely cares about you anymore. At least that's what you think. The boyfriend is not the one that bothers you the most, no, it's her new friends. And everytime you're about to pass away, she comes at you to remind you she is still your friend. What a confusion. You don't know wether she likes you or not. You slowly become an ever-mourning person, glooming into his bedroom, waiting to talk to her. You can't hate her, nevermind how hard you try, everyime you see her, it's like you fall in love for the first time again. You know joy and melancholy both in the same feeling.

But you're all alone. You have time to think. And you come to the conclusion she just talks to you out of pity, and you decide to end up all this crap. Who would care anyway ? Her ? Nah, she has new friends now, and your death would only makes her closer to them, so that's a good point for them. In fact, you don't do it by hatred, but for love of her.
Though, her feelings never changed towards you. You couldn't know. But your suicide fails. You are still great friend with the girl, but forever you'll live with this weight on your chest.

This may sound cliché and shitty, but this is a true story and there are no word powerful enough to describe it. If you call it emo, well you're just another moron who didn't understand to feelings except the pleasure of a sperming cock.

Have a good day.

Pitch:
The first stage begins with a man ripping out the heart of his own young son. He appears to be utterly insane and the event is more than harrowing. The door is then bashed down and the man is killed by the police. The boy from there is sent to a genius doctor who, against all ethical codes, replaces the boy's destroyed heart with the man's perfect heart. However during the rehabilitation, to follow, a nurse, who was helping the kid, discovers something odd. The boy is the man and the kid is her long lost son. She also learns that the boy had the same genetic heart defect that she has; which causes a lifetime of pain and which will eventually kill her (Presumably cured in the future that the man must come from). Now that the kid has the heart of his older self he should be fine except for one minor implication: two months after the initial event and one day after the discovery the boy is found dead - his new heart ripped from his chest and placed in a preservative cooler. The mother was the last to see him. She now has to prove her innocence with a story that is unbelievable and do it while dying from the same defect that her son had. She can only do this by supporting the charges and by using her future adult son's heart. She must walk with the devil and take the heart of her own son.

Need story ?
READ STEPHEN KING MISERY AND YOU GOT A STORY.
!

Ever considered parodies? Maybe you could create a "what-if" story from some anime or video game?

Oh oh I know! You should take all the scary men on your page and think about them being a secret society/group that's been around for ages. They could be a group of various people with different techniques and abilities. And each individual has his own position in the group. They could be evil, unless you wanna twist it around and have them be good but LOOK evil. lol There's one thing that everyone in the group is after, but that thing has a different result for each individual once he gets his hands on it. They may dislike/hate each other, but they have to work as a team in order to get to what they all want.....

A 24 hour long clip of a cow eating grass. Dumb cow never sleeps.

Uh, the comment by AshlynSanchez Is the story for the TV show Heroes. Just thought I'd tell you before you actually decide to do an animation like that.

if people really believed that story is everything they wouldn't still be making pictures about talking animals who give each other a hard time (but they're friends)

I have quite a few so, if you don't like these, private message me and I'll have more.

1.) A girl goes out into the woods after killing her parents, and eventually collapses after days of not eating sleeping or a few other things. She is found by Volk, a man with a wolf's head who has a vast obsession with painting and tends to prefer solitude. She decides to stay with Volk and live with him for a while. However, while Volk is out hunting, The girl is abducted by law officials and sentenced to death. When Volk gets back, he takes it upon himself to save her. Adventure ensues.

2.) Twelve year old Recks lives in a world where everything is decided by games (yeah, you just lost it). The oldest male or female in a family must play the games to represent their family. To win at these games means you may get to eat tonight, to lose means death. Recks' mother has been playing the games for the family ever since the death of his father, but when it is found Recks is quite advanced in skill at the games, he must play for his family. Adventure ensues.

this is a love story.
a girl named sarah meets a boy named sam .
sams the silent type of guy . well sarah is cornered by these thugs and then sam saves the day . they end up falling in love . then they live happly ever whateveryou get the point.

or this---v

|-SpeedAnime:ComedyCool-|

nuff said lol

l8s

Marty McEnzy is blamed for a murder he didn't commit and sent to life in jail, but he and a bunch of aquaintences manage to get out, but as soon as they do, they realize their country has been taken over by a secret militia group from Russia.

you should make a vid on my life

I promise you it wont disappoint...

The vid will reach Viewage like you've never reached Viewage before.

*nods**nods*

a kid thats in high school hes the protagnist in the story but hes nothing like youd think the hero in the story would be and he tries to help people but it only ends with him getting hurt himself/so far thats all i got for it

i loso whens the next vid to be expected by?

A human becomes a cyborg in an attempt to transcend above other humans, but realizes that he is still only human.

Yay, simplicity :)

snow snow for lucy is probably the best written flash animated thing ever. and your not proud ?? xD

"The Artist Killer"

A song circulates everywhere and artists die. A detective suggests this but nobody believes him because everyone knows he's paranoid. It's a tale of misunderstanding, metaphysics and anal sex.

You. Yes, you. Your life. An animation, about you animating the animation, of you. You are the character, and you are animating yourself, as an animator. It's your life, as you see it, through the eyes of your animation. I don't think this has been done before...the mirror effect sure, but not like this. Let me know what you think.

I have an idea. I call it...

Seven minutes in Hell

A man is at home. It is 6:58 pm. His favorite show is about to come on. As the minute pass, he hears an evil voice. The voice says,"You have 7 minutes until hell arrives..." He becomes confused and checks the time. The time changes from 6:59 to 6:60. He checks the clock, because of its error. Then, all of the electricity turns off. He looks for a flashlight to light up the house, but they do not activate. He resorts to using a torch. He then just noticed that only the digital clocks are active. The time is now 6:63. Objects in the house start to move. He starts to become scared. 6:64, insects and rodents roam all over the house. 6:65, evil voices are heard once again, laughing. 6:66, the gateway to hell opens. Just then, a friend comes knocking on the front door. The man quickly runs to open the door. His friend says,"Yo, you got free time?" He starts yelling,"Dude, what time is it?!" His friend shows him an old antique watch and says,"It's 7:07." As he looks at the clock, everything in the house returns to normal. His friend looks at him and says,"You don't look so well. You should go outside more often. Come. We're planning on going to the park to talk about things. You could get some fresh air and exercise a bit." The man sighs. Then, he says,"You're right. Let's go." And so, he goes with his friends...

I've had this idea for a long time. I wanted to make an animation from this, but I don't really have free time to do so. Call it stupid if you want.

giant crazy religious cult takes over sum planet, people sad, fight back, they are free on christmas... it can be a drama, horror what ev.

wow thats gold right ther

check out this site it's for animators writers musicians etc.
http://www.freewebs.com/gamerninjax/
add me as a friend on there my name's UKNOWYULOST

Jifo was a famous clown who was so funny that he frozepeople with his jokes.
During his existence, humans and vampires stayed in the same kingdom, elves and orcs lived in the same forest.
UNTIL, Jifo lost his nose...
few decades later, a gurl found teh nose, Teh Big Red Nose
THAR IT BEGINS

I still think u should make one based obn "try".

Ashlyn Sanchez got that idea from the show Heroes, spike, lol.

ROFL! Most of these story ideas are from TV shows like "Lost, Heroes, etc".

Here's one from using a synopsis maker, and it only took... 3 minutes, + copy/pasting editing :D

Desolate Luminescence

"Action: A war hardened soldier teams up with a well-built female cyborg to save the earth from aliens. In the process they are locked in a haunted house with a ghost. By the end of the movie they blow up bad guys and end up winning the admiration of their world, living happily ever after.

Think Die Hard meets [District 9]."

Made using the Plot-o-matic
(c)1998, 1999 Mad Dog Productions
All Rights reserved
emperor@maddogproductions.com

xD this is gonna sound kinda dumb i kid that smokes meets this lady and well aall i can say is he gets possed buy a strange but good spirt in the form of his cigarette smoke and its said this spirt forms into the things you love most or do most not really humans most of the time its just feelings that they possess xD kinda dumb ive been trying to make it for awhile

not sure if something like this has been done before but i'll shoot for it anyways.

"The world is so boring. Nothing happens, nothing ever happens. It's just same old same old every day, the only excitement there is ever is when something bad happens to someone" these are the thoughts of a young author who yearns for reality to vanish and be swallowed up by the wild imaginings of fantasy a world where the norm would be all that is abnormal.

One day he is confronted by a group of thugs and as he is forced to go along with their demands he cannot help but wish, deeply and passionately, with his entire being that he could posses power like those in his books. Power to alter fate to change and rebel against the series of event made before him by an uneventful world where one can only feel alive in misery. A knife suddenly appears in his hands. he sees it, does not question it. The universe granted him the power he asked for, he can now change his pr e made destiny. he kills the thugs brutally.

It then occurs to him that he had not become a hero of fantasy for they never slew with such pleasure as he had. no he'd become a villain "So be it. If it's what I need to do get rid of this reality. I'll become the evil mastermind who brings out the hero of light. When I am vanquished, reality will die with me." are his thoughts as he walks out on the street and uses the knife, the power given to him by the universe to fulfill his new destiny, the one he chose.

to be honest this very much reflects me in the sense that many times I wished i had the power to kill off reality and make the world like the books I write or the animes i watch and the mangas I read.

Truthfully, if i had a choice between becoming a demonic villain doomed to be vanquished by light and living out the rest of my life in mundane reality and happiness. I'd probably chose villainy.

I hope that at least if you don't like it that you can give me constructive criticism on the points you think need improving.

Not really one to leave comments, but a story i made is about a mercenary named Bane, who wanted to break off from the yakuza, and take care of an orphan daughter he found on one of his missions. The yakuza master is not thrilled at the idea, and kidnaps her. Bane now has to rescue her from the yakuza leader Mr.Mitsugiya

PM your email if you want me to send you the the full story
NOTE: The story is short.

'-'

I need to view "Snow Snow For Lucy" movie!

T.T

When u'll release it in Newgrounds or in the site?

.-. Bye

Sorry,,, I forgot one more thing

"Abou Hug me to the skies, U can make a flash about the Girl and Her Cat-Boy?

=D

Well Spike, I had a strange conniption. I often hear of the Book of Revelation, Apocalypse, and "doomsday prophecies". People keep guessing about the details of the end times themselves, but not the aftermath... after every prophecy manifests and passes over, when humanity transcends its fallacies and perversions to once again become equally enlightened and faithful to the truth. Nobody lingers on what happens then, and I find that disturbing.

So my story's setting is a human civilization sans imminent apocalypse. The conflict arises when they master faster-than-light travel. According to the prevailing theories on quantum physics (notably Einstein's), you can't do that, although if you could, you would move back through time itself. Let's say the masterminds behind this new technology fail to take this into note, and they land in the midst of the twenty-first century, where a corrupted universal church and a perverted, world-spanning superpower--bearing no likeness to a constitutional republic--are presided over by the Anti-Christ, literally possessed by Lucifer. Here's the problem: our protagonists (suppose we feature the three characters who appear in your "Speed Animation" cartoons) have foreknowledge about how things turn out. Also, the tracking systems of this long-studied epoch are fully aware of the unidentified flying object that crash-lands somewhere along the (formerly) American northeastern seaboard. Trying to stay out of history's way eventually embroils our poor saps into a fight for history itself. Meanwhile, they postulate and contrive any possible means of returning to their own time... and the solution is far from airtight, or desirable, to say the least.

It's not utterly original in terms of concepts, although as a speculative/sci-fi premise, it throws the whole faster-than-light travel convention over its head to empty the pocket change flowing out of its pockets like a river of quicksilver.

You could change this to Hawaii if you have an easier time drawing tropical features, although I am a big fan of H.P. Lovecraft and always wanted to involve some kind of ruthless doomsday cult. They would generally lurk around New England or New York State, since Rhode Island is where Lovecraft grew up. Aside of that threat, there are those in hiding who believe that the explorers are actually heaven-sent, believing them to be messengers of God. And lo and behold, one of the best-known contras who led the people from bondage is counting on them to either pull some coolness off or at least become a mere distraction, so he gets carved into the history books while our hapless explorers end up carved to bits.

These are all suggestions, though. Don't take them too seriously. Hopefully, they are cool enough to spark some other cool idea into your head. The story is not quite the fish-out-of-water so much as it is a tap dancer upon a stage of eggs. The hardest part is determining its scope (there's a lot to cover in terms of Revelation and what happens afterward) while staying faithful to the theme and entertaining people without losing focus. If you're ever interested, send me a PM and request a more detailed outline.

okay it's the war with monsters & less monsters :D .. to be continued

i was dissipointed of puzzatales it was very primitive the stories were very very simple and cliche and the gameplay was bad. the games were bad. its just bad unlike anything else you made

That movie clip was like a really nice mafia movie, even the actors were like pros in there. Except for the guy who killed Leon, he looked kinda..shook up or something.

you should really go to anime productions or be a director. I love anime and I love your works, you should really do it XD.

P.S. I'm not the only one waiting for "that" to come out T~T (at least give a clue XD)

A girl whose father runs a hotel waunders around. Everyone is depressed inside the hotel, yet they always extend their stay as her father doesn't mind the extra money he gets to charge. Soon, people are killing those around each other and when no-one is left, killing themselves as the girl hides from them and their insane behaviors.

She meets a guy who saves her when one man sees her and tries to kill her as he takes her out of the hotel, noticing the elevators are out of commission (the guy grimaces as it's aparant of his massive headache/ signs of pain). As they take the stairs, they find tons of mass-insanes during their habbits of killing each other as the fight their way down the stairs. As they reach the hotel door, they realize it's locked. So they run back to the office of the father to find the hotel key as they find her father inside.

The young man practically collapse as she begs her father to leave the hotel as the father constantly in a maniac sound how they can be rich off the hotel, they only need to remove the corpses and new guests will appear he says. Finnally, the girl grabs the key as the father raises the gun to her, the young man grabs the father and takes him down to the floor as the girl shoots her own father so they can leave. They both make it out with polices charging in to get whoever is left and the hotel is disposed of soon afterwards as they both live a happy life together.

I know horror isn't your type of stories to make, but I think it has a pretty good story line.

this is set in a much simpler world than now. Someone, man, woman, whatever, is charged with the task of "drawing" the world into existence. However, there's no color, so one day, the "artist" concentrates, and poof -- color appears.

Added Note: the "artist" does not know what they look like themselves, so that can introduce a complication.