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[Sketched - Happy Birthday]

Stories and movies

is all about interesting points of views.

well done.

[Sketched - Therapy]

ahahaha

maybe the psychologist was gay and he wants to make him gay or somethign.

this is gooooooooooooooooood!

you're a great writer! All your stuff i seen so far are great! or good.
And you've got lotsa potential. Normlay I don't giv eout pointers or anything, but this is special.

1) ADD SOUND OR AMBIENCE NOISE OR SOMETHING. (You done that well in the war one, but still coulda been better). when someone gets up, grabs a cup, writes in journal, just about ANYTHING YOU CAN CINEMATICLY SEE, (or it could be off screeN) add the sound effect. Sounds help you see. You probably know all this, so why dont you add the sounds etc.?

2) your endings can always be better. Think of a set up in the begining then pay it off in the end. You have lotsa potential, that's why im bringing up the speck in your eye even though i have a plank in mines.

[Sketched-Merry Sketchmas]

GREAT

great at dialouge!!!!!!

okay, yes, teh patterned happened again, but it wasn't strongly focused in this one.
What I love is the strong contrast. Inteligence vs stupidity.

There's always one stupid person/obvliious and one really bright witty person.
I LOVE THAT CONTRAST! You can really spark light from the darkness with that.

lovely! im faving you now.

[Sketched - Super Bored]

ahaha

I loved his sarcasm. he's bff with orlando bloom. rain man refference.
ahhaha, great.

Also, I've noticed a pattrern, and a pattern that I love. Happened 3 times, im gonna see if it happens 4 times then I'll share it with you . that i love it.

[Sketched - Pregnancy Test]

AHAHAHA

your a great writer! first i seen the army one when he was on his death bed, now THIS?!

gee, im going to see wut else you have.

[Sketched - Last Requests]

lolll

this was super good. loved the concept.

[- Rain -]

lol

yur appreciation level is cute.
good that your happy with the feed back.

keep making stuff. go go go. good choice of song too. got a nice vibe from this

[Cheer Up Emo Kid: Perfect]

verry good

for somethign like this.

Subtitles would be perfect

[War, Snow and Fire]

Lovely!

Yo. I'm/i was tired. no i still am. anyways. I was gonna peak at this, i was planning to just sleep and watch it later, but it caught my attention. i wanted to just watch it.

good job. you won. you passed the pop corn test.

Lovely! great direction! cute story! love the dragon. OHHHHHHH!

AND Haredawg did lovely with the song! Way to go you too!
Yall are best friends annnnd best team!
so cool!

[An Unfortunate Girl:Lapse]

weird stuff

i love weird weird weird creeeepppy stuff. seems like you'd love salad fingers.

gosh, i'm inspired. i wanna do a weird weird weird psychotic weird weird creepy story. so weird someone would think im crazy. AHHHHHHHHHAHA .

loving the eerieness.